Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Focus on grammatical accuracy and clarity. Give a direct short answer using correct tense and subject-verb agreement, then add one brief supporting detail (max 2–3 short sentences). For example, use past tense: say whether you had a bike, why or why not, and one simple detail about memories. Avoid contractions that produce errors (e.g., “I doesn't” is incorrect).

例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. My family could not afford one, so I usually walked to school. Occasionally I borrowed a neighbor’s bike to ride in the park.

提案: Clarify your main point and use consistent vocabulary and grammar. Start with a clear opinion (Yes/No) and then explain with specific reasons and an example. Use correct noun forms and avoid filler words. For coherence, use linking words such as 'because', 'for example' or 'however'.

例: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and commuting. For example, in my city there are dedicated bike lanes and bicycle rental stations near public transport.

× I don't. No, I doesn't.

✓ I don't. No, I didn't.

The student used 'doesn't' which is present tense and wrong for a past-time question ('Did you have a bike when you were a child?'). Use the past tense auxiliary 'did' with the base verb: 'didn't'. Also, 'I don't' is present and does not match the past question; 'I didn't' is consistent. Suggestion: match auxiliary tense to the question (use 'did' for past) and use the base verb after 'did'.

× No, because in my country, uh, bicycle is the most popular and people refer is.

✓ No, because in my country, bicycles are the most popular and people prefer them.

Several problems: 'bicycle' should be plural ('bicycles') when speaking generally, and the verb should agree ('are'). The phrase 'people refer is' is incorrect; likely intended 'people prefer them'. 'Prefer' is the correct verb and takes an object ('them' referring to bicycles). Suggestion: use plural nouns when talking about things in general, ensure subject-verb agreement, and use the correct verb and pronoun to complete the idea.