Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答过于简短，缺乏细节与连贯性。建议给出主题句并补充1-2句具体细节，比如是否曾借过自行车、为什么没拥有（家庭条件、偏好或安全原因）、以及这对你的影响。使用连接词使回答更自然。

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My family couldn’t afford one at the time, and I usually walked to school instead. Sometimes I borrowed a neighbor’s bike on weekends, but I never owned one myself.

提案: 回答太笼统且语法有小错误（it’s → they’re 或 bikes are）。建议直接给出观点的同时用1-2个具体原因或例子支持，例如交通习惯、基础设施或气候，并使用连接词如 because, however, for example。

例: I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country because most people prefer cars for convenience. For example, there are few bike lanes in cities and long commuting distances make cycling impractical for many.

× I think it's not popular.

✓ I don't think they're very popular.

原句使用了“it's not popular”有两个问题：第一，主语应指代“bikes”（复数），不能用单数代词“it”；第二，陈述方式不自然，英语中谈论一般看法常用“think”后接否定形式“I don't think...”来表达更礼貌和常见的观点。改为“I don't think they're very popular.”既使用了复数代词“they're”，也用了更自然的否定表达。建议：注意代词要与先行词数一致（单复数一致），并在表达一般看法的否定时优先使用“I don't think...”结构。