Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Сделайте ответ более грамматически правильным и логичным: используйте правильное время (past simple), уберите заполнители («umm»), сократите лишние детали и добавьте связующее слово для плавности. Также уточните возраст без лишних символов и добавьте одно конкретное подробность (например, что вы чувствовали или где именно практиковались). Например: 2–3 предложения, каждая ясна и связана.

例: Yes, I did. I had a bicycle that my father taught me to ride when I was about six, and we practised every day in the park near our house until I felt confident.

提案: Отвечайте прямо и ясно, используйте корректную структуру предложения и подходящую лексику. Уберите повторы («I think it's yes», «so I think it's yes») и заполнители. Добавьте связку и конкретный пример (времена суток, места или статистика), чтобы поддержать мнение. Ограничьте ответ до 2–3 предложений и используйте «in my opinion» или «I think» один раз.

例: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in my country. For example, many people cycle to work and you can see groups of cyclists every evening on the roads and in parks.

× When I was a child, yes I do.

✓ When I was a child, yes I did.

The speaker refers to a past time 'When I was a child', so the verb must be in the past tense. 'Do' is present tense; it should be 'did' to match the past context. Suggestion: use past forms when referring to past events (e.g., 'I did', 'I had').

× I had a bicycle and my dad taught me to ride it and umm when I was about 6:00 and we used to practice every day in the near our park.

✓ I had a bicycle and my dad taught me to ride it when I was about six, and we used to practice every day in the nearby park.

Multiple issues: time expression 'when I was about 6:00' incorrectly uses a clock time; use age 'six'. 'In the near our park' is incorrect preposition and word order; use 'in the nearby park' or 'at the nearby park'. Also combine clauses clearly and keep past tense consistent. Suggestion: remove filler words, use correct age expression, correct preposition and adjective order ('nearby park').

× In my point of view, I think it's yes because umm, every night, every day are bikers walking along a road around with their bikes.

✓ In my point of view, I think so because every day and every night there are cyclists riding along the roads with their bikes.

'I think it's yes' is unnatural; use 'I think so'. Word order 'every night, every day are bikers' is incorrect; subject should follow 'there are'. Use 'cyclists' instead of 'bikers' if formal, and 'riding' is the correct verb for bicycles. Also fix word order 'along a road around' to 'along the roads' or 'around the roads'. Maintain present simple for habitual actions. Suggestion: use 'there are' + subject, correct collocations ('every day and every night', 'riding along the roads').

× So I think it's yes.

✓ So I think so.

Again, 'it's yes' is not idiomatic English. Use 'I think so' to express agreement or affirmation. Suggestion: prefer 'I think so' or 'Yes, I think they are popular.'