Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, ngữ pháp đúng và đầy đủ thông tin. Bạn nên sửa lỗi ngữ pháp (ví dụ: 'which was bought by my grandmother'), dùng một câu chủ đề ngắn rồi bổ sung 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể (mẫu, màu sắc, kỷ niệm) và không quá dài. Ngoài ra tránh dùng từ sai (ví dụ 'spot' sai chính tả/ từ).

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle bought by my grandmother, and I used to ride it around my neighborhood every afternoon.

提案: Câu trả lời hiện tại khó hiểu, nhiều lỗi từ vựng và ngữ pháp, và thiếu cấu trúc mạch lạc. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp (Yes/No/Partly), rồi giải thích lý do cụ thể với 1–2 câu hỗ trợ sử dụng liên từ (because, although, however). Sử dụng từ vựng đúng (bikes, not bags; prefer/use instead of 'Spike'), và cung cấp ví dụ ngắn (xe máy, phương tiện công cộng, sở thích của người trẻ).

例: I think bicycles are less popular now. Because of rapid economic development, many people prefer motorbikes or cars, especially for long commutes. However, bicycles are still common for short trips and among students or people who exercise regularly.

× Yes, when I was small I had a bike which was spot by my grandmother.

✓ Yes, when I was small I had a bike that was bought by my grandmother.

The error is using 'spot' which is incorrect verb choice; the intended meaning is that the grandmother bought the bike. Use 'bought' (past tense of 'buy') and a defining relative pronoun 'that' for objects. Also 'which' can be used but 'that' is more natural in defining clauses. Suggestion: use 'bought' for purchase and 'that' for the restrictive relative clause.

× I don't really think that bags are common in my country 'cause with the development speed in my country where technologies and more identity.

✓ I don't really think that bikes are common in my country because, with the rapid technological development and changing identities, priorities have shifted.

Multiple problems: 'bags' is likely a wrong word for 'bikes' (lexical choice), 'cause' should be 'because' in formal speech, 'development speed' is awkward — use 'rapid development' or 'rapid technological development', and the clause 'where technologies and more identity' is ungrammatical. The sentence needs restructuring to show cause: 'because, with the rapid technological development and changing identities, priorities have shifted.' Suggestion: use clear cause connectors, correct nouns, and concise phrasing.

× Take priority.

✓ Other things now take priority.

Fragment: 'Take priority.' lacks a clear subject. It should be a full clause like 'Other things now take priority.' Suggestion: include the subject ('other things') and appropriate tense/modal to complete the sentence.

× I think let's let's people use Spike.

✓ I think people now prefer to use cars or motorbikes.

Unclear and ungrammatical phrase 'I think let's let's people use Spike.' Likely intended to say that people prefer another transport (e.g., 'scooter' or 'bike' typo). 'Let's' is a suggestion form and should not be combined with 'I think'. Replace with a clear statement: 'I think people now prefer to use cars or motorbikes.' Suggestion: avoid combining 'I think' with 'let's'; choose one and make subject and verb clear.