Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Вы просто повторили вопрос экзаменатора вместо того, чтобы ответить. Это даёт нулевой информационный вклад. Нужно давать прямой ответ (да/нет/иногда), затем 1–2 предложения с конкретной поддержкой: кто дал велосипед, как вы его использовали, и одно небольшое воспоминание. Ограничьтесь максимум 3–4 предложениями и свяжите идеи средствами (for example, when, because, so).

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for me when I was eight, and I used it to ride to school and play with friends in the evenings. For example, every Saturday we would race down the park path, which helped me feel independent and confident.

提案: Опять же вы повторили вопрос вместо того, чтобы высказать мнение. Дайте чёткое мнение (yes/no/partly), затем объясните причину и подкрепите конкретным примером: инфраструктура, климат, или популярные районы. Используйте связки (because, however, for instance) и не больше 3–4 предложений.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities with good bike lanes. Many people cycle to work because traffic is heavy and cycling is faster during rush hour. For instance, in my city the local government recently built several protected bike paths, which encouraged more commuters to cycle.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The student repeated the examiner's question instead of answering; this is a sentence structure/response error. Provide a proper past-tense statement to answer a past-time question. Use 'had' (past tense of 'have') and include a subject 'I'. Reason: The question asks about the past, so the response must be a declarative past-tense sentence. Suggestion: Start answers with 'Yes' or 'No' then a past-tense verb and subject, e.g. 'No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.'

× Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.

The student repeated the examiner's question instead of providing an answer; this is a sentence structure/response error. Give a full declarative response using present simple for opinions: 'I think' plus the clause 'bikes are popular in my country.' Reason: The question requests the student's opinion in present time; respond with 'I think' plus a present-tense clause. Suggestion: Use 'I think' or 'No, I don't think so' and avoid repeating the question verbatim.