Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is relevant and gives a personal example, which is good. To improve, make your response more fluent and grammatical: use one clear topic sentence, avoid sentence fragments, and keep within 3–4 sentences. Add a linking word to connect ideas and give a brief specific detail (e.g., where you rode, how it made you feel).

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents would take me cycling around our neighborhood every evening, which I really enjoyed because it felt free and fun. I usually rode with my older sister, and we sometimes raced along the park path.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but contains errors and hesitations (e.g., 'bags' instead of 'bikes'), vague time expression, and overgeneralization. To improve, correct vocabulary, use a clear topic sentence, give specific reasons or examples, and use linking words to structure your points. Keep it concise (2–3 sentences).

例: Yes, I think bikes are still quite popular in my country. For example, many children ride bikes to school or in the evenings, and cities have more bike lanes now, so cycling is both a common pastime and a practical way to get around.

× My parents used to take me cycling around our house every evening and I love to go.

✓ My parents used to take me cycling around our house every evening and I loved it.

The sentence mixes past habitual 'used to take' with present 'I love to go.' Maintain past tense for consistency when describing childhood routines. Change 'I love to go' to 'I loved it' or 'I loved going' to match past timeframe. Suggestion: Use consistent past tense when talking about past habits, e.g., 'I loved going.'

× Go cycling with my.

✓ I went cycling with them.

The fragment 'Go cycling with my' lacks a subject and uses incorrect pronoun 'my' instead of an object pronoun. It should be a complete sentence with subject and verb in past tense to match context. Use 'I went cycling with them' or 'I went cycling with my friends.' Suggestion: Always include subject and proper object pronoun; ensure verb tense matches surrounding sentences.

× Yes, I think bags are very popular and very famous in my country.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country.

The speaker likely meant 'bikes' but said 'bags.' This is a lexical error; also 'very famous' is odd for objects like bikes. Use 'bikes' and 'popular' without 'very famous.' Suggestion: Choose the correct noun and simple adjective: 'bikes are very popular.'

× You know, like umm, since centuries ago until now.

✓ You know, like, since centuries ago until now they have been popular.

The phrase 'since centuries ago until now' needs a verb and proper tense. To express duration from past to present, use present perfect ('have been popular'). Also 'since centuries ago' is awkward; better 'for centuries' or 'for many centuries.' Suggestion: Use 'for centuries' or 'have been popular for centuries.' Example: 'They have been popular for centuries.'

× I think every single child always love to go cycling with the friends around the house.

✓ I think every single child always loves to go cycling with friends around the house.

Subject-verb agreement error: 'every single child' is singular and requires the third person singular verb 'loves' not 'love.' Also 'the friends' is unnecessary; 'friends' is sufficient. Remove extra article. Suggestion: Match singular subjects with singular verbs and avoid unnecessary definite articles: 'every single child always loves to go cycling with friends.'