Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer simply repeated the examiner's question rather than answering it. To improve, answer directly with a clear topic sentence (e.g., say whether you had a bike), then add one or two brief supporting details using linking words (for example, 'however', 'because', or 'and'). Keep it natural and concise (no more than 3–4 sentences).

例: Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle with training wheels, and I learned to ride it in my neighborhood park. Because my parents encouraged outdoor play, I used it almost every day after school.

提案: Your answer has pronunciation/word-choice errors ('bites' instead of 'bikes') and is vague. Start with a clear opinion sentence, then give specific reasons or examples, using linking words such as 'however' or 'for example'. Avoid contradictory or uncertain phrasing like 'it would be good if it does'—be precise about what you mean. Limit to 2–4 sentences and use relevant vocabulary (commuting, cycling lanes, environment).

例: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country at the moment. For example, most people prefer cars because there are few dedicated cycling lanes, so riding can feel unsafe. However, I hope cycling will become more common in the future if cities invest in better bike infrastructure.

× Actually, I don't think bites are so popular in my country, but it would be good if it does in the future.

✓ Actually, I don't think bikes are so popular in my country, but it would be good if they were in the future.

There are two problems: 'bites' is a spelling error (should be 'bikes') and 'does' is incorrect because it attempts to agree with plural 'bikes'. This is a third person singular issue and subject-verb agreement issue; the modal 'would' and the conditional refer to a hypothetical situation, so use 'they were' (subjunctive/conditional) to match plural subject. Suggestion: correct spelling to 'bikes' and use 'they were' or 'they became' for hypothetical future situations (e.g., 'but it would be good if they were in the future' or 'but it would be good if they became popular in the future').