Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is correct but too short. Give a brief topic sentence and add 1–2 supporting details (e.g., what kind of bike it was, who gave it to you, or a short memory) using a linking word to make it natural and informative. Keep it under five sentences.

例: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bicycle with training wheels that my parents bought me when I was six, and I learned to ride it in our neighborhood park. Because I practiced every weekend, I became confident riding without help within a few months.

提案: Your answer has grammar and clarity problems and is brief. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms, and add a specific reason or example using a linking word (e.g., because, for example). Keep answers natural and concise (maximum five sentences).

例: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. For example, I see cyclists on dedicated bike lanes every morning, especially near schools and parks.

× I seen bikes every day.

✓ I saw bikes every day.

The verb 'seen' is the past participle form and must be used with an auxiliary (have/has/had). In simple past statements without an auxiliary, use the simple past form 'saw'. Replace 'seen' with 'saw' to form the correct past tense. Suggestion: for similar sentences use 'saw' (I saw...) or use present perfect with an auxiliary (I have seen...).