Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more natural and add one specific supporting detail. Start with a clear topic sentence then briefly expand with a linked detail (use a linking word). Keep to no more than 3–4 short sentences.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. In fact, it was a small red bicycle that I used to ride around my neighborhood every afternoon. Because it had training wheels at first, I learned to balance gradually and felt very proud when I finally rode without them.

提案: Correct minor grammar, use linking words, and add a specific example or brief reason to make the answer more convincing. Keep sentences concise and varied vocabulary (e.g., 'cycling' instead of repeating 'bike').

例: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country, especially among young people. For example, many students cycle to university because it is cheap and faster than buses. Additionally, people often ride for exercise and leisure on weekends, so cycling culture is growing.

× Yes, I think bike are quite popular in my country, especially among young people.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among young people.

The noun 'bike' is singular but the verb phrase and context require plural. Subject-verb agreement error: a plural noun 'bikes' must be used with 'are'. Change 'bike' to 'bikes' to match 'are' and the general reference to many bicycles. Suggestion: use plural nouns when speaking about things in general (e.g., 'bikes are popular').

× Many people ride bike for exercise, transportation and fun.

✓ Many people ride bikes for exercise, transportation and fun.

The verb 'ride' should take a plural noun when referring to people riding bicycles in general. This is an incorrect use of quantification/number: 'many people' implies multiple instances, so 'bike' should be plural 'bikes'. Also include 'for' list is fine. Suggestion: match noun number to quantifiers like 'many' (use 'bikes').