Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 문법과 시제 사용에 집중하세요. 과거 사실을 말할 때는 과거형을 사용해야 하고, 간단한 주제 문장 후에 한두 문장으로 구체적 세부사항(예: 자전거 종류, 누가 사줬는지, 자전거를 어떻게 사용했는지)을 덧붙이면 자연스럽고 풍부한 답변이 됩니다. 또한 연결어(예: when I was about ten, because, so)를 사용해 문장을 매끄럽게 이어보세요.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle that my parents bought for me when I was about eight, and I used to ride it to the park every afternoon because it was close to our house.

提案: 명확한 주제문을 말한 뒤 이유를 둘 이상 제시하고 구체적인 예를 추가하세요. 또한 명사에 관사나 복수형을 올바르게 쓰세요(예: bikes are…). 연결어(예: also, for example, moreover, therefore)를 사용하면 답변이 더 논리적이고 자연스럽습니다.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because they are cheaper than other types of transportation and they are convenient for short trips. For example, many students and office workers use bikes to commute to school or work, especially in smaller towns where traffic is not heavy.

× Yes, I have a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The student used the present tense 'have' with a past time reference 'when I was a child'. Use the past tense 'had' to match the past time frame. Suggestion: Use past tense verbs for actions or states that occurred in the past, e.g., 'I had', 'I lived', 'I went'. This is a Present tense issue (ID 6).

× Yes, because bike is cheaper than other transportation.

✓ Yes, because bikes are cheaper than other forms of transportation.

The student omitted the plural form or necessary article and used the uncountable noun 'transportation' awkwardly. Use the plural 'bikes' to discuss general facts and 'other forms of transportation' to compare categories. Alternatively, 'a bike is cheaper than other modes of transportation' would also be correct. This is an Article errors issue (ID 22).