Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Improve grammar (use past tense consistently), make the response more natural and concise, and add one specific supporting detail. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two brief supporting details using a linking word. For grammar: say “my parents gave it to me” and “I usually went cycling” (or “I would go cycling”) to keep past tense consistent. Keep it to 2–3 sentences and avoid repetition.

例: Yes, I did — my parents gave me a bike when I was about seven. As a result, I often went cycling with them on weekends, usually in a nearby park, which helped me build confidence and enjoy outdoor activities.

提案: Work on pronunciation and sentence structure, choose the correct words, and add a clear topic sentence plus a specific supporting reason or example. Use linking words (for example, “because” or “for instance”) to make your response coherent. Correct common errors: say “Yes, I think bikes are very popular” and provide a reason such as commute, exercise, or recreation. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

例: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and for exercise. For instance, families often cycle together in parks on weekends, and many cities now have bike lanes to encourage riding.

× Yes I did, I had a bike when my parents give to me.

✓ Yes, I did. I had a bike when my parents gave it to me.

The sentence uses present tense 'give' while referring to a past action; use past tense 'gave'. Also include the object 'it' for clarity and add punctuation. Suggestion: use past simple for completed past events and include pronoun for the direct object.

× I usually go cycling with my parents on the weekend.

✓ I usually go cycling with my parents on weekends.

'On the weekend' can be acceptable in some varieties, but 'on weekends' is the standard expression to describe habitual action. Use present simple 'usually go' for habitual actions (which is correct); adjust time phrase to match native usage. Suggestion: prefer 'on weekends' or 'every weekend' for habitual activities.

× Just I think vice very popular in my country people usually use bike when they go cycling on the park.

✓ I just think bicycles are very popular in my country. People usually use bikes when they go cycling in the park.

The original has multiple issues: awkward word order ('Just I think'), wrong word 'vice' instead of 'bikes' or 'bicycles', missing 'are' for the plural subject, missing plural forms, and incorrect prepositions ('on the park' should be 'in the park'). Split into two sentences for clarity. Suggestions: use correct word order 'I think', use plural nouns with correct verb 'are', and use 'in the park' for activities inside a park.

× Just I think vice very popular in my country people usually use bike when they go cycling on the park.

✓ I just think bicycles are very popular in my country; people usually use bikes when they go cycling in the park.

The sentence incorrectly uses singular forms 'vice' and 'bike' where plural 'bicycles' and 'bikes' are needed to refer generally to the category of vehicles. Use plural nouns when speaking about things in general in this context. Suggestion: use plural nouns and ensure subject-verb agreement (bicycles are).