Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is direct but too brief and repetitive. To improve, give a clear topic sentence and add one or two specific supporting details (e.g., when you got it, how often you used it, or a memorable moment). Use a linking word to connect ideas and avoid repeating words exactly from the question.

例: Yes, I did — I got my first bike when I was seven. I rode it almost every day after school to visit friends and explore my neighborhood, which helped me become more independent.

提案: Your answer gives an opinion and a reason but has some grammar and repetition issues. Make language more natural by correcting grammar (e.g., "use them every day") and varying word choice. Add a specific example or contrast to strengthen the statement and use a linking word to connect reason and example.

例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them every day for short trips. For example, commuters often cycle to work to avoid traffic, and bike lanes in my city make cycling a safe and convenient option.

× Of course, bikes are very popular in my country because people use everyday.

✓ Of course, bikes are very popular in my country because people use them every day.

The sentence is missing the object pronoun 'them' after 'use' to refer to 'bikes', and 'every day' should be two words. Also, adding 'them' clarifies what people use. Suggestion: include the appropriate object pronoun and write 'every day' as two words.

× It's very comfortable and very convenient transport in my city.

✓ They are very comfortable and very convenient means of transport in my city.

'Transport' as an uncountable noun needs a determiner or a phrase like 'means of transport' when describing bikes. Also, 'It' is incorrect because 'bikes' is plural; use 'They'. To describe how bikes function as a mode of travel, use 'means of transport' or 'a form of transport'. Suggestion: match the pronoun number to the plural subject and use an appropriate noun phrase ('means of transport').