Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Correct the grammar and make the answer more natural and slightly more informative. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense, then add one specific supporting detail using a linking word (e.g., “and” or “so”) to enrich the response. Keep it concise (no more than 3–4 sentences).

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle with training wheels, and I rode it around my neighborhood every weekend.

提案: Improve grammar and coherence: use correct subject-verb agreement, the correct comparative structure, and a linking word to connect reason. Add a specific example or brief detail to make the statement more persuasive. Keep the response within 2–3 sentences.

例: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country because traffic is often heavy, so many people prefer cycling to driving. For example, commuters often use bikes for short trips to work or the market to save time.

× Yes, I have a bike when I was little.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was little.

The sentence mixes present tense 'have' with a past time expression 'when I was little.' Use the past tense 'had' to match the past time reference. Suggestion: change present verbs to past when referring to past events (I had, I went, I lived).

× There's a lot of people prefer cycling than driving a car because of the traffic.

✓ A lot of people prefer cycling to driving a car because of the traffic.

'Theres' (there is) is incorrect with 'a lot of people' (plural), and the verb 'prefer' should not follow a 'there is' construction here. Also 'prefer X than Y' is incorrect; use 'prefer X to Y.' Correct structure: subject 'A lot of people' + verb 'prefer' + object 'cycling' + preposition 'to' + object 'driving a car.' Additionally, match verb number: use 'There are' if using a 'there' construction (There are a lot of people...), but simpler and more natural to say 'A lot of people prefer...'.