Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答很简短，只给出了肯定或否定，缺少主题句后的支持细节。建议给出一到两句具体说明，例如什么时候有、是谁给的、你如何使用它或你对它的感情；在句子间使用连接词使表达更连贯。注意不要超过5句。

例: Yes, I did. I had a red bicycle when I was about eight, which my parents bought for my birthday. I rode it to school and around the neighborhood almost every day, so it was very important to me.

提案: 回答有拼写或用词错误（'Baker'应为'bikes'），并且缺乏具体支持细节。建议先直接给出观点，再用一至两句具体事实或原因支持（例如哪些人骑车、在哪些城市或场合、原因是什么）。使用连接词提高连贯性。

例: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country. Many people use bicycles for commuting in cities because they are cheap and convenient, and cycling is also promoted as a healthy and eco-friendly option.

× Yes, the Baker is popular in my country.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country.

该句中使用了定冠词“the”并且将名词写为专有名词“Baker”，导致句意不明且与上下文不符。考官问的是“bikes”（自行车）是否在你国家受欢迎，回答应使用复数名词“bikes”表示一般情况，而不是“the Baker”。建议使用复数名词来表示一类事物的普遍情况，且不用定冠词。例如："Bikes are popular in my country." 或者更口语化一点："Yes, bicycles are popular in my country."