Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: حاول أن تبدأ بجملة موضوعية مباشرة ثم تضيف تفاصيل موجهة ومترابطة. مثلاً اذكر لماذا لم يكن لديك دراجة في الطفولة وكيف ومتى حصلت عليها كمراهق، واستخدم روابط بسيطة مثل "but" أو "however" و"because" لتوضيح الفكرة.

例: I didn't have a bike as a child because my family lived in a small apartment, but I got one when I became a teenager. I received it as a birthday gift and used it mainly to ride around my neighborhood and to visit friends.

提案: أجب مباشرة ثم وضح الأسباب بتفصيل محدد وارتب الجمل باستخدام روابط مثل "however", "because" أو "mainly". اذكر أمثلة ومقارنات (مثل استخدام الدراجات للرياضة مقابل التنقل اليومي) لتقوية الإجابة.

例: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country for everyday transport because cities are designed for cars and public transport. However, they are quite common in sports grounds and parks, where people ride them for exercise and leisure.

× No, it's not, unless if it was in the sports grounds.

✓ No, they aren't, unless they're on sports grounds.

The student used 'it's' to refer to 'bikes' which is plural, so a plural pronoun and verb form are required (subject-pronoun agreement). Also 'unless if' is ungrammatical; use 'unless' or 'if' but not both. Finally, maintain present tense because the question asks about general popularity now. Suggestion: use 'they' for plural nouns, use 'aren't' for present negative, and drop 'if' after 'unless'.