Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Correct the tense and grammar, be concise, and give a clear topic sentence followed by a short specific detail. Use linking words if adding detail. For example, start with a past-tense topic sentence, then add one supporting detail (why or how often).

例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. Instead, I usually used my parents' bicycle to ride to the park on weekends.

提案: Answer directly and add one specific supporting detail using a linking word to make it more informative and natural. Mention where or among whom bikes are popular and why.

例: Yes, definitely. Bikes are very popular in my country, especially in cities, because they are cheap and convenient for short trips.

× No, I don't have a bike.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike.

The question asks about the past ('when you were a child'), so the response must use past tense. Using present tense 'don't have' conflicts with the time frame. Change to 'didn't have' to match past time reference.

× When I'm a child, I usually I use a bicycle.

✓ When I was a child, I usually used a bicycle.

Several errors: the time clause refers to the past so 'I'm' (present) must be 'I was' (past) (Grammar problem type: Present tense issue). Also, 'usually' with past time requires past tense verb 'used' not 'use' (Past tense issue). Remove the extra 'I' after 'usually'. The corrected sentence matches the past time frame and has correct subject-verb agreement.

× Yes, definitely. Bikes are very popular in my country.

✓ Yes, definitely. Bikes are very popular in my country.

This sentence appropriately uses present tense to state a general fact about the current popularity of bikes, so no grammatical correction is needed.