Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your reply is incorrect and unclear: you repeated the examiner's question but changed one word to an unrelated verb, which makes no sense. To improve, answer directly with a clear topic sentence (yes/no or short statement), add one or two specific supporting details using a linking word, and keep to a natural tone. For example, state whether you had a bike, describe it (color/type), and say how you used it or who gave it to you.

例: Yes, I had a small red bicycle when I was about seven. It was a simple single-speed bike that my parents bought for me, and I used it every day to ride around the neighborhood with my friends.

提案: You repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. To improve, respond directly with a clear topic sentence expressing your opinion, then give one or two specific reasons or examples using linking words (for example, because/therefore/also). Keep your answer natural and concise.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For instance, in cities there are bike lanes and shared bike schemes, so lots of commuters choose cycling to avoid traffic.

× Did you have a bike when you were kicked?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

The student used the pronoun phrase 'you were kicked', which is incorrect and nonsensical in this context. The examiner asked about childhood possession, so the appropriate phrase is 'you were a child'. This is an incorrect use of pronouns/phrases and wrong word choice. Suggestion: replace the incorrect pronoun phrase with the correct noun phrase 'a child' to match the intended meaning and maintain grammatical sense.

× Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

This sentence is grammatically correct. It uses present simple tense appropriately to ask about a general opinion, uses plural 'bikes' correctly, and the structure is appropriate for the question form. No changes needed.