Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Give a direct answer and then add one or two specific details. Keep it natural and concise, 1–3 sentences total. Use a topic sentence (Yes/No) and then a brief supporting detail (age, who gave it, where you rode it).

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for my seventh birthday, and I used to ride it around the neighborhood park every afternoon.

提案: Answer directly (Yes/No/It depends) and then explain clearly with specific reasons or examples. Use linking words (however, because, for example). Keep to 2–3 sentences, avoid repetition and unclear phrasing.

例: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country because most people prefer cars for long distances. However, bikes are becoming more common in cities for short trips and among young people who want cheaper transport.

× I think I am very confused by thinking that so bike is not popular in my country.

✓ I think bikes are not very popular in my country.

This sentence has repetition and sentence structure errors (Grammar Problem Type ID 26). The phrase 'I am very confused by thinking that so' is redundant and ungrammatical; 'bike' should be plural to match general statement. Suggestion: state the idea simply using subject-verb agreement and correct plural: 'I think bikes are not very popular in my country.'

× In my country has a different cultural background then I I don't I don't think so.

✓ My country has a different cultural background, so I don't think bikes are popular.

This original fragment lacks a clear subject at the start and repeats words ('then I I don't I don't'), causing sentence structure errors (Grammar Problem Type ID 26). Also 'then' is incorrect for the intended connective; use 'so' or 'therefore'. Suggestion: begin with the subject 'My country' and connect clauses properly: 'My country has a different cultural background, so I don't think bikes are popular.'