Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is correct but too short and lacks detail. To improve, give a brief topic sentence and add 1–2 specific supporting details (e.g., who gave it to you, how you used it, or a short memory). Use a linking word if you add details (for example, "and" or "because"). Keep the response under five sentences and natural.

例: Yes, I did. I had a red bicycle that my parents bought me when I was eight, and I rode it to school and around the neighborhood every day. Because it was lightweight, I learned to ride it quickly and often raced my friends.

提案: The idea is clear but the answer is hesitating and contains a grammatical error (subject-verb agreement). Improve by removing filler sounds, using the correct plural form, and adding a specific reason or example. Start with a clear topic sentence, then support it with one or two specific reasons using linking words such as "because" or "for example."

例: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in my country, especially among children, because they are cheap and convenient. For example, many parents let their kids ride to nearby parks or school, and there are often bike lanes in residential areas.

× MMM I think it is very popular, especially for kids.

✓ MMM I think they are very popular, especially for kids.

The subject 'bikes' is plural, so verbs and pronouns referring to it must be plural. The student used the singular pronoun 'it' which disagrees with the plural noun 'bikes' from the question. Change 'it is' to 'they are' to match number agreement. Suggestion: identify the noun's number (singular or plural) before choosing pronouns and verbs; for plural nouns use plural pronouns (they) and plural verbs (are).