Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, dùng thì quá khứ vì hỏi về quá khứ, cấu trúc ngắn gọn (1-2 câu) và cung cấp thêm chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: nơi bạn đi, tần suất, kỷ niệm). Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như dùng hiện tại thay cho quá khứ và thiếu chủ ngữ/động từ phù hợp.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I rode it to school almost every day and sometimes cycled to the park with my friends.

提案: Câu trả lời cần trả lời trực tiếp (có hoặc không) và giải thích lý do rõ ràng bằng tiếng quá khứ/hiện tại phù hợp. Tránh dùng cấu trúc không rõ nghĩa; cung cấp lý do cụ thể (ví dụ: giao thông, thói quen, cơ sở hạ tầng) và dùng liên từ để nối ý.

例: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country. Most people prefer cars or motorbikes because cities are busy and cycling lanes are limited.

× Yes, I ride a bike goes to ****.

✓ Yes, I rode a bike when I was a child.

ID 5 and 26: Past tense issue and sentence structure errors. The question asked about a past time ('when you were a child'), so the verb should be in the past tense: 'rode' not 'ride'. The original sentence also contains an extra clause 'goes to ****' which is ungrammatical and unclear; remove or clarify it. Suggestion: use a simple past statement matching the question: 'Yes, I rode a bike when I was a child.'

× You're acting whereby is not popular.

✓ I don't think bikes are very popular here.

ID 26 and 11: Sentence structure errors and incorrect use of prepositions/words. 'You're acting whereby' is ungrammatical and uses incorrect vocabulary. The examiner asked about popularity, so a clear opinion statement is needed. Use subject 'I' and verb phrase 'don't think' plus 'bikes are not very popular here' or 'bikes are uncommon here.' Ensure proper word order and appropriate linking words: 'I don't think bikes are very popular in my country.'