Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cümlenin zaman uyumuna ve kelime sırasına dikkat etmelisiniz. Doğru soru formunu kullanmamışsınız ve ‘were’ yerine ‘are’ kullanmışsınız. Ayrıca sınavda cevap verirken soruyu tekrar etmeniz gerekmez; doğrudan konu cümlesiyle başlayın, örneğin geçmişten bahsederken net bir tane konu cümlesi kurun ve 1–2 destekleyici cümle ekleyin. Öneri: Geçmiş zaman kullanın, kısa ve net bir konu cümlesi kurun, ardından bir neden veya anı ile zenginleştirin. Örnek ifadelerde bağlaçlar (for example, because) kullanın.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle that I used to ride to my friend’s house every afternoon. Because we lived close by, I often rode it rather than asking my parents for a lift.

提案: Tekil/çoğul uyumuna ve soru yapısına dikkat edin: doğru kullanım ‘Are bikes popular...?’ olacaktır. Cevap verirken doğrudan görüşünüzü söyleyin ve ardından neden veya bir örnek ile destekleyin. Bağlaçlar (for example, however, because) kullanarak cevabınızı akıcı hâle getirin. Ayrıca ‘so popular’ yerine ‘very popular’ veya ‘popular’ daha doğal olur. Kısaca fikir + sebep + örnek formatını takip edin.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people use them for short trips and commuting because they are cheap and convenient. For example, in cities you can often see students and workers cycling to work during rush hour.

× Did you have a bike when you are child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

The original sentence mixes past tense 'Did you have' with present tense 'are'. When referring to a past time, use past tense for 'to be', which is 'were' for second person singular. Also the phrase requires the article 'a' before 'child'. Suggestion: Use 'were' to match the past tense and include the article 'a' ('when you were a child').

× Do you think bike is so popular in your country?

✓ Do you think bikes are very popular in your country?

The noun 'bike' should be plural ('bikes') when speaking generally, and the verb must agree ('are'). The phrase 'so popular' is colloquial but can be kept; 'very popular' is more neutral. Also English commonly uses plural to talk about things in general. Suggestion: Use plural noun 'bikes' and plural verb 'are' to match subject-verb agreement ('bikes are'), and consider replacing 'so' with 'very' for formality.