Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is correct but too short and lacks detail. Give a brief topic sentence and add one or two specific supporting details (where you rode it, how often, or who you rode with). Use a linking word to connect ideas. Keep it under five sentences.

例: Yes, I did. I had a bright blue bicycle that I rode almost every day around my neighborhood. For example, I often cycled to the local park with my friends after school, which helped me build confidence and fitness.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but is informal and slightly unclear. Start with a clear topic sentence stating your opinion, then give specific supporting details and use linking words (e.g., however, although, for example). Correct minor grammar (e.g., 'people in Taipei'). Keep answers concise and natural.

例: Bicycles are somewhat popular in some areas, but overall motor scooters are more common. For example, in Taipei many people prefer scooters because they are faster for commuting, although bike-sharing programs have become more visible recently.

× You could say so if you live in Taipei, but most of the Taipei people ride scooter.

✓ You could say so if you live in Taipei, but most people in Taipei ride scooters.

Errors: 'the Taipei people' is an incorrect noun phrase; use 'people in Taipei' for natural word order and no definite article. 'ride scooter' omits plural and an article; use plural 'ride scooters' to indicate the activity generally. Suggestions: place the location after 'people' ('people in Taipei'), remove unnecessary 'the', and use the plural noun 'scooters' when talking generally about people riding them. Ensure subject and verb remain consistent with present tense usage.