Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your response repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. Give a direct, concise answer with one topic sentence and up to a few supporting details. Use linking words if you add details. Be specific about when, what kind of bike, or a memory to enrich the reply.

例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle with training wheels when I was six, and I practiced every afternoon in the park until I learned to ride without them.

提案: Your answer attempts to respond but has a grammatical error and is very brief. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add 1–2 supporting details using linking words (for example, because, so, for instance). Be specific about where and why bikes are popular (commuting, leisure, infrastructure).

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. For instance, cities have dedicated bike lanes and many students cycle to school, especially during warm months.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The student repeated the examiner's question instead of providing an answer. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26). Use past simple tense to answer a past-tense question. Provide a subject and verb: 'I had' is the correct past simple form. Suggestion: respond directly to yes/no questions with a full sentence like 'Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.' or 'No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.'

× S bikes are popular in our country.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in our country.

The student wrote 'S bikes...' which appears to be a typo or incomplete response, a sentence structure error (ID 26). The examiner's question is in present tense generalization; use simple present 'are' with plural 'bikes'. Begin with a short affirmation 'Yes,' if answering positively. Suggestion: write complete sentences and avoid stray letters; 'Yes, bikes are popular in our country.' is clear and grammatically correct.