Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Improve grammar (use past simple correctly), reduce hesitation, and make the response more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. For example, use "No, I didn't" instead of "No I had not", and say when and how often you rode the bike with your friend.

例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. However, my close friend did, and she often let me borrow it at the weekends, so I learned to ride by practicing in the park near her house.

提案: Be consistent and avoid contradictions; use clearer structure and vocabulary. Begin with a direct opinion, then support it with specific reasons or examples, using linking words like "however" or "on the other hand." Avoid fillers like "uh" and finish your sentence. Also choose precise words (e.g., "more common" or "less common").

例: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country. Although many people own bicycles for short trips, most prefer cars because they are faster and more comfortable for long distances.

× No I had not, but my close friend had one and she shared her bike with me and every weekend.

✓ No, I did not, but my close friend had one and she shared her bike with me every weekend.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'had not' in response to 'Did you have...' In past simple questions with 'did,' the negative response should use 'did not' + base verb: 'No, I did not (have one).' Also 'and' before 'every weekend' is unnecessary and makes the sentence ungrammatical; place 'every weekend' at the end to indicate frequency. Suggestion: use 'No, I did not. My close friend had one, and she shared her bike with me every weekend.'

× Not actually, it's not so popular, but most people have their own bike and they can ride whenever they want.

✓ Not actually; it's not very popular, but many people have their own bikes and can ride whenever they want.

'Not actually' is unnatural; use 'Not really' or 'Not actually' followed by a clearer structure. 'It's not so popular' is acceptable but 'very' is more natural here. 'Most people have their own bike' has a singular/plural mismatch with 'most people' (use plural 'bikes'). 'They can ride whenever they want' is fine but 'they' already refers to 'people' so repetition of 'they' before 'can' is unnecessary. Suggestion: 'Not really; it's not very popular, but many people have their own bikes and can ride whenever they want.'

× Actually I think uh, people uh, prefer to have cars rather than.

✓ Actually, I think people prefer to have cars rather than bikes.

The sentence is incomplete: 'rather than' must be followed by the thing being compared (e.g., 'bikes'). Fill in the comparison object to complete the sentence. Also remove filler 'uh' for clarity. Suggestion: 'Actually, I think people prefer to have cars rather than bikes.'