Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be careful to repeat the examiner's question correctly and answer it directly. Start with a clear topic sentence stating whether you had a bike, then add one or two short supporting details (how you used it, who taught you, or a memorable experience). Keep answers natural, concise (no more than 4–5 sentences), and use simple linking words like "so", "because", or "and" to connect ideas.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for me when I was eight, and I rode it to school and to visit friends. Because I practiced every day, I became quite confident riding on busy streets. I still remember the day a neighbor taught me how to balance.

提案: Correct pronunciation and grammar errors and structure your response: give a clear opinion, then two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid vague phrases and redundancy. Use precise vocabulary ("bikes" not "bites", "elderly" not "elders", "public transport" singular or uncountable). Keep to 3–4 sentences and use connectors such as "because", "so", "therefore" and "for example."

例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. One reason is that public transport is often crowded or unreliable, so many people use bikes to commute. For example, students and workers often cycle short distances to save time and money. As a result, cycling is common among both young people and the elderly.

× Did you have a bike when you were high?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

The student used 'high' which is incorrect in this context. The examiner asked about childhood; the correct noun is 'child'. This is a sentence structure/word choice error. Suggestion: use 'child' or 'young' to refer to age: 'when you were a child' or 'when you were young.'

× Yeah, I think bites are quite popular in my country, even with children or the elders, because we have to move a lot in our countries and the public transportations on aren't enough to help all of us to move.

✓ Yeah, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, for both children and the elderly, because we have to travel a lot in our country and public transportation isn't enough to help all of us get around.

Multiple errors: 'bites' is a misspelling of 'bikes' (word choice), 'the elders' is unnatural—use 'the elderly' or 'older people' (adjective/noun choice), 'move a lot in our countries' has plural 'countries' incorrectly and 'move' is awkward—use 'travel' and singular 'country', 'the public transportations on aren't enough' has incorrect article and word order; correct is 'public transportation isn't enough', and final 'to move' should be 'get around'. Suggestions: correct spelling 'bikes'; use 'children and the elderly' or 'children and older people'; use singular 'country' if referring to the speaker's country; use 'public transportation' (uncountable) and revise word order to 'isn't enough to help all of us get around.'