Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: - 直接回答時態與語法需正確，避免混合現在式與過去式錯誤。你應先用一句清楚的主題句說明事實（例如：I didn't have a bike when I was a child.）。 - 避免冗言贅句與重複（例如 “to to me”）。 - 若想表達感情，可以用簡短原因或例子來豐富答案，但整體不超過五句。舉例說明：為何沒自行車會讓你感到難過，或描述當時怎麼做替代交通工具。

例: I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My parents thought it was unsafe for young children, so I usually walked to school or took the bus. Because of that, I missed out on learning to ride early, which I felt a bit sad about.

提案: - 回答直接且相關，但要注意語法和名詞單複數（例如 'there are a lot of bicycles' 而非 'there has a lot of bicycle'）。 - 使用更精確的描述並加上連接詞以使表述更流暢（例如：Moreover/For example）。 - 可以補充一兩個具體原因或影響來豐富內容，如共享單車的便利性、環保或交通效率。

例: Yes, absolutely. Bikes are very popular in China, especially in cities like Shanghai. For example, there are many shared bike schemes where you can rent a bike for about CN¥1, which makes short trips cheap and convenient.

× No, I don't have a bike. When I was a child, my parents didn't buy a bike to to me, that's a little bit sad.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike. When I was a child, my parents didn't buy a bike for me; that's a little bit sad.

问题类型：现在时/过去时混淆（应使用过去时）。解释：面试官问的是过去（Did you have... when you were a child?），回答句应使用过去时。原句中开头用现在时“I don't have a bike”与后文“When I was a child”时态不一致，需改为过去时“No, I didn't have a bike”。另外，‘buy a bike to to me’有介词使用错误并且重复‘to’，应改为‘buy a bike for me’。建议：遇到表示过去的时间点（when I was a child, last year, in 2010等），整句动词用过去时；表示“为某人买”用介词 for 而不是 to，注意不要重复单词。

× Yes, absolutely. Uh, in Shanghai there has a lot of bicycle you can pay for CN¥1 to ride.

✓ Yes, absolutely. Uh, in Shanghai there are a lot of bicycles; you can pay CN¥1 to ride them.

问题类型：介词/句法使用不当和主谓位置错误。解释：句子中‘there has a lot of bicycle’结构错误。表达存在/大量某物应使用“There are a lot of bicycles”而不是“there has”。名词应为复数“bicycles”。此外，后半句缺少代词或动词连接，改为‘you can pay CN¥1 to ride them’更通顺。建议：使用存在句时用 there is/are；注意主谓一致（复数用 are）；名词复数形式和代词指代要正确。