Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevabınız net ama dilbilgisi ve yapı hataları var; cümleyi doğru zaman ve düzenle kurun. Konu cümlesiyle başlayın, ardından kısa destekleyici detay verin (örneğin kaç yaşındayken, nasıl bir bisiklet olduğunu veya bisikleti ne için kullandığınızı). Bağlaçları kullanarak cümleleri mantıksal olarak bağlayın. Örnek: 'Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it at age six and used it to ride to the park every weekend.'

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it when I was about six years old, and I used it mainly to ride to the park with my friends on weekends.

提案: Cevabınız fikir veriyor ancak dilbilgisi (örneğin, eksik edat), daha fazla gerekçe ve örnek eksik. Konuya dair net bir görüş (evet/nağ) belirtin, sonra nedenini iki kısa destekleyici cümleyle açıklayın; bağlaçlar kullanın. Örnek: 'No, I don't think bicycles are very popular in my country because of traffic and lack of bike lanes.'

例: No, I don't think bicycles are very popular in Turkey because many people prefer cars and there are few safe bike lanes in cities, so cycling can feel dangerous.

× Yes, I have a bike 16 years old.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was 16 years old.

The student used present tense 'have' and placed the age phrase incorrectly. The question asks about the past ('when you were a child'), so use past tense 'had'. Also include 'when I was' before the age and add 'years old' after the number. Suggestion: use 'I had a bike when I was 16 years old.'

× I think bikes aren't popular Turkey.

✓ I think bikes aren't popular in Turkey.

The sentence omits the preposition 'in' before the country name. English requires a preposition to indicate location. Suggestion: insert 'in' to form 'popular in Turkey.'