Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your response simply repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. Give a direct, concise answer (1–2 sentences) with a topic sentence and a brief detail. Use past tense and a linking word if you add information. Keep it natural and under five sentences.

例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle with training wheels when I was six, and I used to ride it to the park every afternoon.

提案: Your answer is unclear and ungrammatical. Respond directly to the question using present tense, with a clear opinion and one supporting detail. Use linking words (for example, because, so) to make your point coherent. Keep it brief and natural.

例: Yes, I think bicycles are fairly popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise, especially in cities where traffic is heavy.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The student repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. This is a sentence structure/response error (ID 26). The correct response should be a statement in the past tense to match the question. Use past simple 'had' for possession in the past and include a subject 'I'. Suggestion: answer directly with 'Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.' or 'No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.'

× Is there popular in her?

✓ Are bikes popular in your country?

The student's reply is ungrammatical and shows incorrect pronoun use and sentence structure (ID 12). The examiner asked 'Do you think bikes are popular in your country?' The student should respond about 'bikes' and 'your country' or give a yes/no plus brief explanation. The correction uses plural verb 'are' to agree with 'bikes' and the proper noun phrase 'your country'. Suggestion: if answering, say 'Yes, bikes are popular in my country.' or 'No, bikes are not very popular in my country.'