Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Give a direct, clear response and expand slightly with a supporting detail. Start with a full sentence that directly answers the question, then add one or two specific details (where you rode it, who you rode with, or a memory). Keep it natural and avoid filler words.

例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle that I rode around my neighborhood with my friends after school. It wasn’t very fast, but I learned to balance on it and we often raced to the park on weekends.

提案: Answer directly and give specific reasons or examples to support your opinion. Use linking words (for example, however, because) to make your answer coherent and avoid hesitation sounds. Mention concrete infrastructure issues or cite where bikes are popular if applicable.

例: I don’t think bicycles are very popular in my country because we lack safe bike lanes and secure parking for bikes. For example, most roads are designed for cars, and cyclists often have to share busy streets without protection, so many people prefer driving instead.

× Guess I had.

✓ I guess I did.

The original sentence omits the subject 'I' and uses 'had' without an object, causing a sentence structure and verb usage problem (matches 'Sentence structure errors' ID 26). The question asks 'Did you have a bike...?' so the short answer should use the auxiliary 'did' plus the base verb: 'I guess I did.' This supplies the missing auxiliary and completes the sentence. Suggestion: include the subject and the appropriate auxiliary when replying to a yes/no past question.

× I'm not sure because they don't have, uh, all this kind of infrastructure.

✓ I'm not sure because we don't have that kind of infrastructure.

The original uses the pronoun 'they' to refer to the speaker's country, which is unclear and inappropriate; also the phrase 'all this kind of' is ungrammatical. This matches 'Incorrect use of pronouns' ID 12 and also involves article/quantifier issues but per instructions only apply listed types. A clearer, grammatical sentence uses 'we' to include the speaker and 'that kind of' to refer to specific infrastructure: 'I'm not sure because we don't have that kind of infrastructure.' Suggestion: refer to the country you live in with 'we' (or 'my country') and use 'that kind of' for a singular category of infrastructure.