Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Improve grammatical accuracy and naturalness. Start with a clear topic sentence using past tense (e.g., "No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child"). If you want to add brief context, use one or two supporting details with linking words (e.g., "because my family lived in the city" or "but I often borrowed one from a friend"). Keep the answer within 2–3 sentences and avoid tense errors.

例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. However, I often borrowed my neighbor's bike to ride around the block after school.

提案: Work on grammar, clarity and coherence. Begin with a clear topic sentence ("Yes, bikes are quite popular in the Philippines"). Use linking words to support your idea ("mainly because" or "for example"). Give specific reasons and correct noun forms ("children and teenagers"). Mention one or two concise reasons and avoid awkward phrasing like "that's of".

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in the Philippines, mainly because they are affordable and useful for short trips. For example, during the pandemic many children and teenagers used bikes to exercise and travel locally when public transport was limited.

× I don't have a bike when I was a child.

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The sentence mixes present tense 'don't have' with the past time marker 'when I was a child'. Use the past simple 'didn't have' to match the past context. Suggestion: Use consistent past tense for past events (subject + did not + base verb).

× Yes, it's very popular in the Philippines because that's of children and teenager use it most especially during pandemic.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in the Philippines because children and teenagers used them the most, especially during the pandemic.

Several issues: 'it's' (it is) incorrectly refers to 'bikes' (plural) so use 'bikes are'. 'that's of' is ungrammatical; the intended meaning is that children and teenagers use bikes most, so restructure. 'teenager' should be plural 'teenagers'. Tense should be past 'used' to match 'during the pandemic'. Also use plural object 'them' for 'bikes'. Suggestion: Keep subject and verb number consistent, pluralize nouns where needed, and match tense to time expressions like 'during the pandemic'.