Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be natural and grammatically correct: use simple past for completed past situations and give a brief reason or contrast to enrich the answer. Keep it to 1–3 sentences, avoid unnecessary auxiliary forms (e.g., “was not having”).

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I preferred walking to school, and my family couldn't afford one at the time.

提案: Make your opinion clear, use linking words for reasons, and give specific, coherent details. Avoid fillers like “umm,” correct prepositions (ride a bike, on highways), and keep sentences concise (max 3–4).

例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. For example, many young men use them for short trips and commuting because they are cheap and convenient, especially in densely populated areas.

× No, I was not having a bike when I was a child.

✓ No, I did not have a bike when I was a child.

The verb phrase 'was not having' incorrectly uses the past continuous for possession; possession in past is expressed with simple past 'did not have'. Use simple past to state a past fact. Suggestion: use 'did not have' for past possession. Also fits subject-verb agreement and tense context of the question.

× Yes, I do think bikes are popular in my country because most of the boys like to ride a bike and umm people are crazy for by riding a bike for the highways and in the hidden stations they are very umm.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because most boys like to ride bikes, and many people love riding on highways and in remote areas.

Multiple issues: 'I do think' is grammatically acceptable but 'I think' is more natural; 'most of the boys' should be 'most boys' for general statement (article error/quantifier), and 'ride a bike' should be plural 'ride bikes' for general habits (singular/plural). The phrase 'crazy for by riding a bike' is ungrammatical: use 'love riding' or 'are crazy about riding'. 'for the highways and in the hidden stations' is unclear; 'on highways and in remote areas' is clearer (incorrect preposition and word choice). Suggestion: simplify to 'I think bikes are popular because most boys like to ride bikes, and many people love riding on highways and in remote areas.'