Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 首先，注意时态一致性，描述过去经历时应使用过去时；其次，回答应更自然简洁，开头直接肯定并给出简短理由，然后用一两句具体细节支持，避免重复句式；最后，句子间用连接词使表达流畅。建议练习把三四句话控制在不超过五句内，并提供具体例子（如骑车的频率或记忆）。

例: Yes, I did. I had a red bike when I was about eight, and I rode it almost every day after school. Riding regularly helped me build stamina and keep fit, so I enjoyed it as a fun way to exercise.

提案: 首先，注意词汇准确性（bike/back/lease 拼写与用词错误，应使用 ride bikes and people rent or hire them）；其次，回答要具体，给出原因或例子（如城市通勤、交通拥堵或共享单车普及）；结构上先给立场，再用一两句支持细节并用连接词衔接。避免简单重复同一句。

例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient for short trips. For example, many people use shared bicycles for commuting in the city, and bike lanes make cycling a safe and efficient option.

× Yes I did. I have a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was a child.

句子中描述的是过去的情况（“when I was a child”），应该使用一般过去时。原句“I have a bike”使用现在时，与时间状语不一致。建议将动词改为过去式“had”。

× I can ride the bike to let my body stronger than before and I think it is a healthy exercise.

✓ I could ride the bike to make my body stronger than before, and I think it was a healthy exercise.

1) 原句用“can”与过去时间不一致，应使用过去能力的表达“could”或直接用过去时态描述习惯性动作。2) “to let my body stronger”中“let”用法不当，表示使役时应接动词原形或用“make ... + adjective”。因此改为“make my body stronger”。3) 句子时间为过去，后半部分“it is a healthy exercise”也应改为过去时“it was a healthy exercise”。建议将全句统一为过去时并用“make”表达“使更强壮”。

× Many people like to ride their back on the street and there are many backs on the streets.

✓ Many people like to ride their bikes on the streets, and there are many bikes on the streets.

1) “back/backs”是拼写错误，正确名词应为“bike/bikes”。2) 句中使用“their back”不当，表示骑车应为“ride their bikes”。3) 复数名词与动词搭配需一致，且“on the street”与“on the streets”可统一为“on the streets”。建议改为“ride their bikes on the streets”并修正拼写。

× Let people to lease.

✓ This allows people to rent or lease bikes.

原句“Let people to lease.”结构不完整且不符合英语习惯。1) “Let”后不接“to”加动词，且这里需要被动或使役结构更自然；2) “lease”前需要宾语（什么被租赁）。改为“This allows people to rent or lease bikes.”更清晰，表达也与前句衔接良好。