Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Perbaiki tense dan berikan detail singkat. Jawaban saat ini menggunakan tense yang salah (present bukannya past) dan terlalu singkat tanpa informasi pendukung. Gunakan kalimat topik yang jelas (mis. "Yes, I did") lalu tambahkan satu atau dua kalimat pendukung yang menjelaskan jenis sepeda, kapan atau bagaimana Anda menggunakannya, dan perasaan Anda. Pastikan tidak lebih dari 5 kalimat dan gunakan kata penghubung jika menambahkan detail.

例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle that I used to ride around my neighborhood when I was about eight, and I often rode it with my friends after school.

提案: Perbaiki tata bahasa (subjek-verb agreement) dan kurangi pengisi suara seperti "uh". Jawaban harus lebih natural dan spesifik: mulai dengan topik sentence yang jelas (mis. "Yes, they are") lalu jelaskan alasan atau contoh yang mendukung (mis. penggunaan di kota, untuk rekreasi atau transportasi). Gunakan satu kata penghubung untuk koneksi seperti "because" atau "for example" dan jangan melebihi 5 kalimat.

例: Yes, they are very popular because many people use bicycles for short trips and exercise; for example, commuters often cycle to work in the mornings to avoid traffic.

× Yes, I have a bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

The examiner asked about possession in the past ('when you were a child'), so the student should use past tense 'had' rather than present 'have'. Use past simple for completed states in the past: 'I had a bike.' Suggestion: Pay attention to time expressions (e.g., 'when you were a child') to choose the correct tense.

× Yes, uh, bikes is so popular in my country.

✓ Yes, uh, bikes are very popular in my country.

Bikes is incorrect because the plural subject 'bikes' requires the plural verb 'are' (subject-verb agreement). Also 'so popular' is informal; 'very popular' is clearer. Suggestion: Match plural subjects with plural verbs ('bikes are') and prefer 'very' for formal clarity.