Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 발음과 문법을 교정하고 말의 유창성을 높이세요. 구체적으로는 과거 사실을 말할 때 과거형을 사용하고(예: "I had"), 불필요한 중복되는 음성 채우기(um, mmm)를 줄이세요. 또한 한두 문장으로 핵심을 말하고 추가 설명으로 경험을 더 구체화하세요(언제, 누구와, 어디서, 무엇을 느꼈는지). 연결어를 사용해 문장이 자연스럽게 이어지도록 하세요.

例: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was seven. I used to ride it with my father every weekend, and I really enjoyed exploring the neighborhood with him because it felt exciting and free.

提案: 의견을 명확히 표현하고 구체적인 이유나 예를 하나 이상 제시하세요. 문법적으로 주어-동사 일치를 확인하고(예: "people really like riding bikes"), 불필요한 반복을 피하세요. 연결어(For example, because, so)를 사용해 이유와 예시를 자연스럽게 연결하세요. 또한 ‘public’ 다음에 명확한 명사를 붙여 표현을 완성하세요(예: public transport, bike lanes).

例: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient. For example, many people use bikes to commute to work, and cities have dedicated bike lanes and public bike-sharing systems.

× Yes, I have a vibe.

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

The student used the wrong pronoun/word 'vibe' instead of 'bike' and also used present tense 'have' while the question asked about the past. Use 'had' to match past time reference: 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' -> 'Yes, I had a bike.' This corrects the noun and aligns verb tense with the question. Suggestion: Replace incorrect word and use past tense 'had' for past experiences.

× I really enjoy ride the bike with my father.

✓ I really enjoyed riding the bike with my father.

The sentence mixes present simple 'enjoy' with the base verb 'ride', but the context is a past experience. Use past tense 'enjoyed' and the gerund 'riding' after 'enjoy'. Correct structure: 'enjoy(ed) + verb-ing'. Suggestion: For past experiences use past tense and use gerund after 'enjoy' (enjoyed riding).

× I really enjoy ride the bike with my father. MMM.

✓ I really enjoyed riding the bike with my father.

Repeated entry clarifies pronoun/subject remains 'I'. Also remove filler sounds like 'MMM' in formal responses. Ensure verb tense and form match: 'enjoyed riding'. Suggestion: Omit fillers and use correct tense and gerund form.

× I think so, umm, in my country, people's really like ride a bike, riding a bike, umm, example many people use, people use, uh, public.

✓ I think so. In my country, people really like riding bikes. For example, many people use public transport.

Multiple issues: tense and verb form after 'like' requires gerund 'riding'. 'People's' is incorrect contraction here; use 'people'. The noun 'bike' should be plural 'bikes' when speaking generally. The fragment 'people use public' is incomplete; add noun 'transport' to complete the idea. Use clear sentence boundaries instead of run-on fillers. Suggestion: Use 'people like riding bikes' for general habits, pluralize when generalizing, and complete ideas (e.g., 'public transport').