Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Improve grammar, tense consistency and clarity. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid double negatives and unnecessary filler phrases. For example, say you did not have a bike and explain why (cost, transport needs, safety) with a linking word like “because” or “so”. Keep it concise (1–3 sentences).

例: I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my family couldn’t afford one. Also, we lived in a busy city where cycling felt unsafe, so I used public transport instead.

提案: Give a direct opinion, then add one or two specific reasons with linking words. Use complete sentences and avoid trailing fragments. Mention who uses bikes (commuters, students), or why they are popular (cheap, convenient, eco-friendly), and include an example or brief comparison. Keep answers natural and concise (2–3 sentences).

例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient for short trips. For example, many students and office workers cycle to avoid traffic and save money on transport.

× No, I don't have a bike when I'm a kid because it is not not worth able for me to use bike in my childhood, so it is not necessary to be honest.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a kid because it wasn't worth it for me to use one in my childhood, so it wasn't necessary.

The student mixed present and past tenses. The question asks about the past (when you were a child), so use past tense verbs (didn't have, was) rather than present (don't have, I'm). Also 'worth able' is incorrect; use the idiom 'worth it'. 'Bike' needs an article or pronoun: use 'one'. Remove extraneous phrase 'to be honest' which is unnecessary. Suggestion: keep all verbs in past tense for past-time questions and use set phrases like 'worth it' and 'use one' for clarity.

× Well yes, in my country bikes are very popular because. Bike is very important in everyone's life because in contemporary world there are no.

✓ Well, yes. In my country, bikes are very popular because they are an important part of many people's lives, especially in the contemporary world.

The original contains sentence fragments and incomplete ideas ('because.' and 'there are no.'). Combine ideas into complete sentences and supply missing information. Use plural pronoun 'they' to refer to 'bikes' and a clear reason phrase such as 'an important part of many people's lives'. Avoid sentence fragments by completing the clause after 'because'. Suggestion: form complete sentences and explicitly state reasons rather than leaving clauses unfinished.