Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и неточности, а также не отвечает прямо на вопрос в прошедшем времени. Постарайтесь: 1) использовать правильное прошедшее время (I had / I didn't have), 2) дать развёрнутый ответ с одной-двумя дополнительными деталями (почему, когда или с кем), 3) использовать связку для логичности (for example, because, so).

例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. I wanted one, but my parents couldn't afford it, so I usually walked to school or rode on friends' bikes. For example, I remember borrowing my neighbor's bike to ride to the park on weekends.

提案: Ответ слишком короткий и не даёт конкретики. Следует развить мысль: дать своё мнение и привести конкретные причины или примеры. Используйте связки (because, for example, therefore) и 2–3 коротких предложения для детализации.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, in cities you can often see bike lanes and bike-sharing schemes, so cycling is becoming more common and convenient.

× When I was a child, I don't write a bike.

✓ When I was a child, I didn't have a bike.

The student used present simple negative 'don't write' while the question asks about the past. Use past simple negative 'didn't have' for actions or states in the past. Also 'have' is the correct verb for possession; 'write' is incorrect here. Suggestion: use 'didn't' + base verb for past negative and choose the appropriate verb (have) for possession.