Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời thiếu rõ ràng và nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp khiến ý không truyền đạt được. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp với một câu chủ đề nêu rõ bạn có xe đạp hay không, rồi thêm 1–2 câu chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: tuổi khi có xe, mô tả xe, ai tặng, kỷ niệm liên quan). Sử dụng thì quá khứ đơn cho việc trong quá khứ và tránh từ sai/mắc lỗi phát âm trong ngữ viết. Ví dụ các cấu trúc: “Yes, I had a bike when I was X. It was…”, “My father bought/gave it to me.”

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was two. It was a small red bicycle with training wheels that my father gave me, and I remember riding it in the park near our house. I loved that bike because it made me feel independent and helped me learn how to balance.

提案: Câu trả lời không mạch lạc, nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp (thì, số ít/ số nhiều, trật tự từ) và thiếu dẫn chứng cụ thể. Hãy bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng (Yes/No + reason), tiếp theo nêu 1–2 lý do cụ thể và một ví dụ hoặc so sánh. Dùng từ liên kết như “because”, “for example”, “also”. Tránh dùng từ mơ hồ như “everyone else”.

例: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my city because they are cheap and convenient for short trips. For example, many people use bikes to commute to work or to go to the market, and there are several bike lanes that make cycling safer and faster.

× Yes, I have a pie when I'm I was 2. As it is a small spy and power is my is me, my father.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was two. It was small and my father helped me.

The student used present tense 'have' and mixed fragments; the question asks about the past, so past simple 'had' is required. Also 'I'm I was 2' is garbled; use 'I was two'. The rest of the sentence contained unclear words ('pie', 'spy', 'power is my is me') likely intended as 'bike' and 'my father helped me'. Suggestion: use clear past-simple verbs for past events and keep sentences simple and direct. Use numbers in words for ages (two) and avoid mixing tenses. Note: Corrected sentence maintains past-tense narrative and clarifies meaning.

× Yes, I probably are popular in my city because of very cheap and convenient for everyone else way people use by movement move other.

✓ Yes, they are probably popular in my city because they are very cheap and convenient for everyone to use for travel.

The original sentence has subject-verb disagreement ('I probably are popular' is wrong) and incorrect word order and choice. The question asks generally about bikes, so use 'they' as plural subject and present simple 'are' for a habitual truth. Rephrase to 'very cheap and convenient for everyone to use for travel' to correct preposition and noun usage. Suggestion: match plural subjects with plural verbs, keep logical word order, and use appropriate prepositions (for travel/use).