Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Give a more detailed and natural response: start with a direct topic sentence, then add 1–2 supporting details (e.g., what type of bike, who taught you, a brief memory). Use a linking word to connect sentences and keep it within 3–4 sentences.

例: Yes, I did — I had a small red bicycle with training wheels when I was six. I remember my father teaching me to ride it in the park, and after a few tries I was able to cycle without help. It was my favourite way to explore the neighbourhood.

提案: Expand the answer with specific reasons or examples and a linking word to make it coherent. Mention who uses bikes (students, commuters), where they are popular (cities, countryside), or give a brief comparison to other transport modes. Keep it natural and concise (2–3 sentences).

例: Yes, they are quite popular, especially among students and commuters in cities. Because traffic is often heavy and parking is scarce, many people choose bicycles as a cheap and convenient way to get around.

× Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

This sentence is grammatically correct. It correctly uses the past simple tense to respond to a past-time question. No changes are necessary.

× Yes, they are quite popular in our country.

✓ Yes, they are quite popular in our country.

This sentence is grammatically correct. It correctly uses the present simple tense to describe a general fact about the present. No changes are necessary.