Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答没有真正回答考官的问题，只是重复了问题。要直接给出主题句，然后用一到两句具体细节补充。比如说明是否有自行车、骑车的频率、谁给的或在哪儿骑等；使用连词（例如“because”, “so”, “when”）使表达更连贯。保持总句数不超过5句。

例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle that my parents bought me when I was seven, and I used to ride it around the neighborhood almost every day after school because there were many quiet streets nearby.

提案: 回答有观点但表达不够自然且含糊。有语法和词汇错误（例如“used to”后应说明过去习惯；“by car self”不正确）。应先给出明确立场，再用具体原因或例子支持，并使用连接词如“however”或“because”。保持句子简洁且不超过五句。

例: I think bicycles were more popular in the past, but nowadays most people prefer cars. This is because rising incomes and better roads make driving more convenient, although cycling is still common in some cities for short trips or exercise.

× Yes it used to, but now people usually go out by car self.

✓ Yes, they used to, but now people usually go out by car themselves.

句子中存在代词使用错误。原句用“it used to”与前文的复数名词“bikes”不一致，应该用复数代词“they”。此外“self”用法不当，应使用反身代词“themselves”表示“自己（乘车）”。建议：保持代词与先行词在人称和数上一致；当表示“他们自己”时用“themselves”。