Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: คำตอบของคุณไม่ตรงกับคำถามและมีข้อผิดพลาดด้านไวยากรณ์ จำเป็นต้องตอบโดยตรงเกี่ยวกับอดีต ใช้ประโยคหัวข้อแล้วเสริมรายละเอียดเกี่ยวกับว่ามีหรือไม่มี จัดลำดับความคิดให้ชัดเจนและใช้รูปกาลอดีต (past tense) เช่น ‘I had…’ หรือ ‘I didn’t have…’

例: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child. It was a small red bike with training wheels, and I used it to ride to my friend’s house every afternoon. I learned to ride by practicing in our courtyard until I felt confident.

提案: คำตอบของคุณไม่เกี่ยวข้องกับคำถามและมีคำถามที่ซ้ำซ้อนและคำศัพท์ไม่ถูกต้อง ต้องตอบโดยให้ความเห็นเกี่ยวกับความนิยมของจักรยาน ใช้ประโยคหัวข้อตามด้วยเหตุผลหรือข้อมูลตัวอย่าง ถ้าเป็นไปได้ให้เปรียบเทียบหรือยกตัวอย่างเพื่อความชัดเจน

例: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country, especially in cities where traffic is heavy. Many people use bikes for short trips to work or school because they are cheap and convenient. Recently, there has been more cycling infrastructure, like bike lanes, which has encouraged more people to ride.

× Do you have a bike When you were sure?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

The student mixed present tense 'Do you have' with a past-time clause 'when you were sure', causing tense inconsistency and unclear wording. Use past simple 'Did you have' to match 'when you were a child' (past time). Also 'when you were sure' is incorrect phrasing — likely meant 'when you were a child'. Improve by matching tenses (past with past) and using correct time phrase. Suggestion: Replace present-tense auxiliary with past-tense auxiliary for past-time questions and use clear time expressions such as 'when you were a child'.

× Do you drink? Do you drink a bite? Are you popular in your country?

✓ Do you think bicycles are popular in your country?

The student produced unrelated and incorrect questions. The examiner asked about whether bikes are popular; the student's replies 'Do you drink? Do you drink a bite?' are irrelevant and grammatically odd. The correct response should be a question or statement about popularity of bikes using present simple: 'Do you think bicycles are popular in your country?' or an answer such as 'Yes, bicycles are popular.' Suggestion: Stay on topic and use the present simple for general facts (Do you think X are popular? / X are popular in my country).