Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be direct and grammatical. Start with a clear topic sentence answering the question (e.g. “No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child.”). Then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words (for example: “However, I’m learning to ride now because…”). Avoid hesitations and redundancy, and use correct tense and word choices (didn’t have / learning to ride / taking lessons).

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. However, I am learning to ride now because I want to commute short distances, and I have been taking weekly lessons for the past month to build confidence.

提案: Answer directly and expand with one or two specific reasons using linking words. Fix grammar and use more precise vocabulary (e.g. “convenient for transportation,” “economical,” “environmentally friendly,” or give an example). Keep the response concise and avoid repetition.

例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are a convenient and economical way to travel short distances. For example, many people use bicycles to commute to work in crowded cities since they save money and avoid traffic.

× Uh, no, I have not bike when I was a child, but since now I'm trying to uh uh, give the tutorials and learn the tutorials of bike.

✓ No, I did not have a bike when I was a child, but now I am trying to give tutorials and learn about bikes.

Multiple errors: 'have not bike' is incorrect for past possession — use past simple 'did not have' (Past tense issue and Subject-verb agreement). 'When I was a child' sets past context so the verb must be past. 'since now' is unidiomatic; use 'now'. 'I'm trying to uh uh, give the tutorials and learn the tutorials of bike' has awkward wording and redundancy. Use 'I am trying to give tutorials and learn about bikes' to express both teaching and learning. Suggestions: use correct past simple for past possession, remove filler words, replace 'since now' with 'now', use 'learn about' + plural 'bikes' or 'a bike'.

× Yes, of course. Bikes are very popular in my country because it's easy to transportation and also helpful for the people.

✓ Yes, of course. Bikes are very popular in my country because they are an easy means of transportation and are also helpful for people.

Errors: 'it's easy to transportation' is wrong preposition and count/use of 'transportation' — use 'an easy means of transportation' or 'easy to use for transportation'. Also 'it's' (singular) refers to 'bikes' (plural); use 'they are'. 'Helpful for the people' is overly specific; use 'helpful for people' or 'helpful to people'. Suggestions: match subject and verb number, use correct noun phrase for 'transportation', and avoid unnecessary definite article 'the' before 'people'.