Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer repeats the examiner's question and contains grammatical errors, so it does not respond. To improve, answer directly with a clear topic sentence (yes/no or brief statement), then add one or two specific supporting details. Use correct tense (past simple) and keep it natural and concise. For example, start with “Yes, I did” or “No, I didn’t,” then add a detail using a linking word like “because” or “but.”

例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bike until I was about ten, and I used to ride it to my friend’s house every afternoon because it was close by.

提案: Your answer again repeats and distorts the examiner’s question, making it unclear. To improve, reply directly (simple opinion), then support it with specific reasons or examples. Use appropriate vocabulary (popular, common, used for commuting, leisure) and linking words such as “because” or “for example.” Keep it to one topic sentence plus one supporting sentence.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, in cities you often see commuters riding bicycles to avoid traffic during rush hour.

× Do you have a bike when you we are a child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

This sentence mixes present simple 'do you have' with a past time clause 'when you were a child' and contains incorrect pronoun and auxiliary forms ('we are' instead of 'you were'). Use past tense 'did' for the question about a past period and use the past form of the pronoun/verb 'you were'. Suggestion: To ask about past possession, use 'Did you have...' and use the correct past form of 'to be' for 'you' -> 'were'.

× Do you think bike air powerfully and your country?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

This sentence has several word choice and structure errors: 'bike' should be plural 'bikes' when speaking generally, 'air' is a misspelling of 'are', 'powerfully' is an incorrect adverb here where the adjective 'popular' is required, and the order 'and your country' is wrong—use 'in your country'. The correct present simple question about general opinion is 'Do you think bikes are popular in your country?'. Suggestion: Use plural for general nouns, use the linking verb 'are', choose the adjective 'popular' instead of an adverb, and place the prepositional phrase 'in your country' at the end.