Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Jawaban terlalu singkat dan tidak alami. Berikan kalimat topik yang jelas (past tense untuk pengalaman masa lalu), lalu tambahkan detail pendukung seperti kapan Anda memilikinya, siapa yang memberikannya, atau pengalaman berkesan. Gunakan kata penghubung sederhana jika perlu.

例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle when I was about seven, which my parents bought for me as a birthday present. I used to ride it to my friend’s house every afternoon, and I remember learning to balance on the pavement behind our building.

提案: Jawaban tidak lengkap, tata bahasa tidak tepat, dan tidak ada detail pendukung. Jelaskan pendapat Anda dalam satu kalimat topik lengkap, lalu beri alasan atau contoh konkret (misalnya perbedaan kota dan desa, atau alasan kurangnya popularitas). Gunakan linking words seperti 'however', 'because', atau 'in contrast' untuk keterkaitan ide.

例: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country because most people prefer cars or motorbikes for convenience. However, cycling is becoming more common in some cities due to bike-sharing schemes and growing awareness of health and the environment.

× Yes, I have.

✓ Yes, I did.

The examiner asked about a past situation ('when you were a child'), so the student should use past tense. 'Have' is present tense and does not match the time frame. Use 'did' to answer a yes/no question in the past. Suggestion: use past simple verbs for actions or possessions in the past (e.g., 'I had a bike').

× Not too much popular, but.

✓ Not very popular, though.

The phrase 'Not too much popular' is ungrammatical in English. 'Much' is not used before adjectives in this way; use 'very' or 'too' with adjectives ('too popular' or 'not very popular'). The trailing 'but.' is an incomplete clause. Replace with a complete phrase such as 'though' or complete the clause (e.g., 'but some people still use them'). Suggestion: use 'not very + adjective' for mild negatives and avoid sentence fragments.