Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevap kısa ve dilbilgisi hataları içeriyor. Geçmişten bahsedildiği için 'have' yerine 'had' kullanılmalı. Ayrıca doğrudan konu cümlesinden sonra 1-2 destekleyici cümle ekleyerek açıklama vermelisiniz (örneğin nerede kullandığınız, kim verdiği veya neden sevdiğiniz). Cümleler 3-5 arasında tutulmalı ve bağlaçlar (for example, because, when) kullanılmalı.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it to visit my friends in the neighborhood because our streets were quiet and safe. For example, I remember cycling to the park every weekend with my brother.

提案: Cümle yapısı karışık ve dilbilgisi hataları var (tekrarlayan 'country', 'bikes is' yerine 'bikes are'). Ayrıca ifadeler açık ve spesifik değil; 'beautiful' bisikletler için garip bir sıfat. Daha mantıklı ve spesifik nedenler verin (kısa mesafeler, ekonomi, çevre dostu, altyapı) ve bağlaçlarla akışı iyileştirin.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because distances between places are short and many people prefer them for short trips. In addition, cycling is economical and environmentally friendly, so many students and workers use bikes daily.

× Yes, I have a bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

The question asks about possession 'when you were a child', which places the context in the past. The student used present tense 'have' instead of past tense 'had'. Use past simple 'had' to match the time reference. Suggestion: pay attention to time markers (e.g., 'when I was') and change present verbs to past tense accordingly.

× Yes, because my country is very small country and bikes is very beautiful, a means of transportation.

✓ Yes, because my country is a very small country and bikes are a very common means of transportation.

There are multiple issues: missing article before 'very small country' ('a very small country'); subject-verb agreement and pluralization with 'bikes is' (should be 'bikes are'); adjective choice 'beautiful' is odd for 'bikes' in this context so 'common' fits meaning better; 'a means of transportation' should be 'a means of transportation' or 'a common means of transportation' — keep singular 'a means' but match with adjective. Suggestions: add the indefinite article before singular countable nouns, make subject and verb agree in number, and choose adjectives that fit the intended meaning.