Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is too short and repetitive. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add 1–2 specific supporting details (when you had it, how you used it, a short memory). Use a linking word to connect ideas. Keep it natural and under five sentences.

例: Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child. I got it when I was about seven and rode it to school and around the neighborhood every day. For example, I remember learning to balance on a quiet street with my older brother helping me, which made me feel very confident.

提案: Your answer is a one-word repetition and lacks explanation. Give a direct opinion then support it with specific reasons or examples (who uses bikes, for what, and where). Use linking words like "because" or "for example." Keep it concise and natural.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. For example, in cities you can see commuters cycling to work on dedicated bike lanes, and in rural areas children often ride bikes to school.

× Yes, yes, yes.

✓ Yes, I did.

Repeated single-word responses do not provide a complete sentence and can be considered a sentence structure issue (ID 26). The question 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' asks about past possession, so reply with a full past-tense sentence: 'Yes, I did.' This includes the subject 'I' and the auxiliary 'did' required for past simple short answers. Suggestion: use short answers that include the auxiliary verb for clarity, e.g., 'Yes, I did.'

× Yes, yes, yes.

✓ Yes, I think so.

The examiner asked 'Do you think bikes are popular in your country?' which expects a present-tense opinion. The repeated 'Yes' is not a complete response (ID 26). A grammatically correct brief reply is 'Yes, I think so,' which supplies the subject and verb and fits the present-tense question. Suggestion: provide a short opinion sentence or expand, e.g., 'Yes, I think bikes are quite popular.'