Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cümle yapısı ve dilbilgisi üzerinde çalışmalısınız. Soru tekrarı ve karışık zaman kullanımı ("are when you were") hatalı; sınavda net, doğrudan cevap vermeniz gerekir. Kısa ve doğrudan bir giriş cümlesi kurun, ardından gerekirse 1–2 destekleyici cümle ekleyin. Bağlaçlar (for example, because) ile sebepleri veya bir anıyı kısaça açıklayın. Ayrıca maksimum 5 cümleyi aşmamaya dikkat edin.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle with training wheels because I learned to ride around my neighborhood. For example, I used to ride to the park every weekend with my friends.

提案: Bu cevap tamamen tekrardır ve hiçbir bilgi vermiyor. Soru sorarken değil, soruya cevap verirken konuşmalısınız. Açık bir görüş cümlesi verin (evet/çoğunlukla hayır), sonra sebep veya örnekle destekleyin. Bağlaçlar (however, because, for instance) kullanarak mantıklı bir yapı kurun ve özgün ayrıntılar ekleyin.

例: Yes, I think bikes are fairly popular in my country, especially in cities with bike lanes. Because traffic is often heavy, many people choose cycling for short trips. For instance, university students and office workers often cycle to save time and money.

× Did you have a bike when you are when you were a child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

The student repeated and mixed tenses and phrases ('are' and 'were'), creating an incorrect sentence structure. Remove the extra 'are when you' so the past tense question is clear and consistent. Suggestion: Use 'Did you have' with 'when you were a child' for past time references.

× Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

This sentence is already grammatically correct and uses the present simple tense appropriately to ask about a general situation. No correction needed.