Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Give a fuller response: start with a clear topic sentence, then add brief supporting details (reason, a memory, or what you used instead). Use one or two linking words to connect ideas and keep it under five sentences. Also vary vocabulary (e.g., "own a bike" instead of "have a bike").

例: No, I didn’t own a bike when I was a child. Instead, I usually walked to school or took my parents’ scooter, because our family couldn’t afford one at the time. However, I remember borrowing a neighbour’s bike sometimes, which was fun on weekends.

提案: Provide a topic sentence that states your opinion, then give specific supporting reasons and an example. Use linking words (for example, because, however) and some varied vocabulary (e.g., "common," "widely used"). Keep it natural and concise (max five sentences).

例: I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country because most people prefer cars or motorcycles for commuting. For example, our cities have heavy traffic and few bike lanes, so cycling is often unsafe. However, some people use bikes for short trips or exercise on weekends.

× No, I didn't have a bike.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike.

No correction needed: the student used the past simple negative 'didn't have' correctly to answer a question about childhood. Keep as is.

× No, bikes aren't popular in my country.

✓ No, bikes aren't very popular in my country.

Minor improvement rather than strict grammatical correction: the original sentence uses the present simple negative 'aren't popular' correctly to describe a general present situation. Adding 'very' can more naturally convey degree of popularity, but the original is grammatically correct.