Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer shows mishearing and only repeats the examiner's question instead of answering. Improve by first directly answering (yes/no), then give one supporting detail. Keep it concise and natural. Also pronounce key words clearly (bike, child) and avoid repeating the question. Use linking words like “because” or “so” to connect ideas.

例: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bicycle that my parents bought me when I was eight because I wanted to ride to my friend’s house. It helped me become more independent and I rode it almost every day.

提案: Your answer expresses a clear opinion but is disfluent and contains many hesitations and grammar errors. Improve by using a clear topic sentence, then two specific supporting details linked logically. Reduce hesitation, use correct plural/singular forms and smoother linking words such as “for example” or “because”. Keep it to 2–4 sentences.

例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them to commute to school or work. For example, students often cycle to school and adults use bikes for short trips to the market, which is also a cheap and healthy option.

× Did you have a bite when you were child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

The student used the wrong word 'bite' instead of 'bike' and omitted the article 'a' before 'child'. This is a vocabulary choice and sentence structure error. Suggestion: Use the correct noun 'bike' for bicycle, and include the article 'a' before singular countable nouns like 'child' ('a child').

× Absolutely, because it's very, very much bike where in, in my, uh, countries, country, St. uh, people who are there to, uh, go to school, go to our workplace or go play and do excite to improve the health.

✓ Absolutely. Bikes are very popular in my country. People use them to go to school, go to work, or play and exercise to improve their health.

This original utterance has multiple problems: incorrect word order, missing plural marking and articles, wrong verb forms, and unclear phrases. Key corrections: use 'Bikes are very popular' (subject-verb agreement and plural noun), 'in my country' (correct preposition and singular noun), 'go to work' instead of 'go to our workplace', and 'play and exercise' instead of 'play and do excite'. Suggestions: Break ideas into clear sentences, use plural forms for general statements (Bikes are), use standard collocations ('go to work', 'exercise'), and avoid filler words. Ensure verbs match the intended meaning and follow consistent tense/purpose.