Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your reply does not answer the examiner's question and is short and confusing. Give a direct topic sentence that answers the question, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep it concise (no more than 5 sentences) and natural.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it as a birthday present when I was seven, and I used to ride it to the park every weekend. Because I lived near other kids, we often rode together, which helped me become confident on the road.

提案: Your answer is too short and vague. Start with a clear opinion, then support it with specific reasons or examples using linking words (for example, because, in addition, however). Aim for 2–4 sentences to be natural and informative.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, in cities there are bike lanes and shared-bike systems, so students and commuters often choose cycling as a cheap and convenient option.

× 'Student: I think so.'

✓ 'Student: Yes, I think they are.'

'The examiner asked about the general popularity of bikes in the country, which calls for a present simple statement about a plural noun (bikes). The student responded with a short, vague reply "I think so," which is not incorrect grammatically but is imprecise. To match the question and provide a clearer present-tense answer, use the present simple with the plural subject and verb: "I think they are." Suggestion: expand the answer with details, e.g., "Yes, I think bikes are very popular here because many people use them for commuting.'