Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevap doğal ve doğrudan; ancak daha spesifik detaylar, bağlaçlar ve kısa açıklamalar ekleyerek zenginleştirilebilir. Örneğin bisikletin rengini, ne sıklıkta sürdüğünüzü veya bazı anınızı belirtin. Ayrıca cümleleri birbirine bağlamak için 'and', 'so', 'because' gibi bağlaçlardan faydalanın ve toplam cümle sayısını 3-4 arasına tutun.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child; my mother bought it as a birthday present. It was a small red bicycle with a bell, and I rode it almost every weekend in the park near our house. Because I practiced a lot, I soon became confident riding with my friends.

提案: Cevap kısa ve anlaşılır ama dilbilgisi hataları ve belirsiz ifade var. 'Used to car' yanlış; bunun yerine neden popüler olmadığını daha açık biçimde belirtin ve spesifik örnekler verin (ör. ulaşım tercihleri, altyapı eksikliği). Ayrıca bağlaçlarla görüşünüzü genişletin ve 2-3 cümle kullanın.

例: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country because most people prefer cars for convenience and comfort. Moreover, there are few dedicated bike lanes in many cities, so cycling can feel unsafe. As a result, cycling is more common among young people and hobbyists rather than as a daily commuting option.

× I don't think so because everyone used to car.

✓ I don't think so because everyone used to travel by car.

The original sentence is grammatically incorrect because 'used to' requires a verb to indicate a habitual past action, and 'car' is a noun that needs a verb phrase and a preposition when indicating means of transport. Use 'travel by car' or 'go by car' after 'used to'. Also ensure tense matches the question about general popularity: 'I don't think so because everyone travels by car' would be appropriate for a present habit. If you mean past habit, keep 'used to travel by car'.